Hello everyone! I'm an international student from South Korea, and I've been studying in the US for about six months now. I can speak pretty wellāI can order coffee, talk with friends, and follow most lecturesābut writing is a completely different monster. My essays come back covered in red ink, and my professor says my sentences are "grammatically correct but don't flow naturally." I really want to know how to improve writing skills to sound more like a native speaker. I understand all the grammar rules from my textbooks, but when I write, it comes out stiff and awkward. Do I need to read more American books? Watch more TV shows with subtitles? Find a language partner who can edit my papers? I'm feeling a little discouraged, but I'm determined to get better. If anyone has been through this journeyālearning to write in a second languageāplease share your wisdom with me! I'm ready to put in the work.
Iām also an international student and that āgrammatically correct but awkwardā comment is so common. Usually itās not about rulesāitās about word combinations (collocations) and sentence rhythm.
What helped me the most:
Steal sentence patterns, not ideas. Find 2ā3 strong essays in your class (or sample papers online), and copy the structure of sentences like:
āAlthough X, Y because Z.ā
āOne reason isā¦, another isā¦ā
Do this for one paragraph, then swap in your content.
Build a ānatural phrasesā list (chunks): plays a role, raises the question, leads to, is associated with, in contrast, for example. Memorizing chunks makes writing flow way faster than memorizing grammar.
Use tools to check ānaturalnessā: search your phrase in quotes on Google (or COCA corpus). If āmakes influenceā shows few results but āhas an influenceā shows tons, youāve found the fix.
Writing center + read aloud: if you canāt say the sentence comfortably, it probably wonāt read smoothly.
Also: aim for clear first; ānative-likeā comes later