RobShein
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Hello everyone! I'm from Brazil, I speak Portuguese and Spanish at home, and English is my third language. When I started university in the US two years ago, I genuinely thought I would fail every writing class. 
Persuasive writing in English? Expressing opinions with nuance and style? It felt like climbing a mountain with no ropes.
My first persuasive essay came back with so much red ink I couldn't see my original words. My professor wrote "your ideas are good but your argument gets lost in language issues." I cried for hours. I felt so stupid, even though I knew I was smart in my own languages.
But then I found a method that changed EVERYTHING, and I want to share it for other non-native speakers who might be struggling:
1. Write your argument in YOUR language first.
I started writing my main points in Portuguese, where my thinking is natural and nuanced. Then I translated just the KEY IDEAS, not every word.
2. Use SIMPLE sentences.
Native speakers think complex sentences = smart writing. NOPE. Clear, short sentences are MORE persuasive because your argument is easier to follow. I stopped trying to sound fancy and started trying to sound CLEAR.
3. Create a "power phrase" bank.
Every time I read a good persuasive essay, I saved phrases that worked: "The evidence suggests..." "More importantly..." "This matters because..." I built a document of these phrases and practiced using them.
4. Read your essay OUT LOUD.
If it sounds awkward when you speak, it IS awkward. Your ears catch what your eyes miss.
5. Get ONE trusted reader.
Not five people with conflicting opinions. One person who understands your voice and can help you clarify, not rewrite.
Last semester, I got my first A on a persuasive essay. My professor wrote "compelling argument, clear voice." I literally framed it.
Persuasive writing in English? Expressing opinions with nuance and style? It felt like climbing a mountain with no ropes.My first persuasive essay came back with so much red ink I couldn't see my original words. My professor wrote "your ideas are good but your argument gets lost in language issues." I cried for hours. I felt so stupid, even though I knew I was smart in my own languages.
But then I found a method that changed EVERYTHING, and I want to share it for other non-native speakers who might be struggling:
1. Write your argument in YOUR language first.
I started writing my main points in Portuguese, where my thinking is natural and nuanced. Then I translated just the KEY IDEAS, not every word.2. Use SIMPLE sentences.
Native speakers think complex sentences = smart writing. NOPE. Clear, short sentences are MORE persuasive because your argument is easier to follow. I stopped trying to sound fancy and started trying to sound CLEAR.3. Create a "power phrase" bank.
Every time I read a good persuasive essay, I saved phrases that worked: "The evidence suggests..." "More importantly..." "This matters because..." I built a document of these phrases and practiced using them.4. Read your essay OUT LOUD.
If it sounds awkward when you speak, it IS awkward. Your ears catch what your eyes miss.5. Get ONE trusted reader.
Not five people with conflicting opinions. One person who understands your voice and can help you clarify, not rewrite.Last semester, I got my first A on a persuasive essay. My professor wrote "compelling argument, clear voice." I literally framed it.
